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13 May 2010

Tame the Wild Cobra Chapter X – Sneak Preview

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Nelson rode away from the castle at break neck speed.  Elizabeth, the witch and this wicked place be damned!    Berigordious spent the better part of the night trying to get him drunk and throwing half naked women at him, as if he was some young pup still wet behind the ears and this would make up for the loss of Saniia.   He wanted that woman, damn it!   And unlike Prince Michael with his pious act of virtue, he knew just what to do with her.   He wanted his hands on those glorious breasts and those promising hips as he'd bargained for!  Unwelcomed, the mocking words of his father, when he cornered Nelson after he had met with Berigordious rang in his ear. 
"You wouldn't have been fool enough to enter into an agreement with that man, would you?  Tell me I've taught you better."  His derisive voice rang in his ears.  "Tell me I've thought you better.  Tell me I've taught you better" and then his mocking laughter.

But he hadn't listened.  Just as he had not listened countless of other times, and again, his father had been right!   Damn, Berigordious!!!  He had the nerve, after he was well into his cups, to boast that he just wanted to see what Michael would do if he showed up.  He said he knew well that the two were perfect for each other and he was very pleased with the match.  He said all of this while Nelson sat there, as if he was a blundering idiot, there to be cuckold by any man with the inkling.  Well, that was far from the truth, and he was going to make that clear to everyone!  Especially Prince Michael, who was as vain as a peacock and just as jarring to the eyes with his fancy clothes and jewels.  He couldn't understand for the life of him why women swooned when they spoke about him, but he'd fix that once and for all.

As the sun crept up into the sky, Nelson's shadowy figure, dwarfed by the size of the stallion he'd stolen, made his way East, towards Epicia at the base of the Epic Mountains.  He decided to double back through Encino Valley towards the barren land just in case Elizabeth sent some of her loyal animal servants after him.  Here, in this rocky terrain she'd have to call the scorpions and lizards to her rescue and that would be difficult.  They served a different master.  The thought did occur to him that she might send an eagle to pluck him out of the sky but then she'd leave her beloved horse in the wilds with no one to care for it.  He'd made sure to choose one of her favorites.  With no water for miles the domesticated animal would surely die and he knew Elizabeth would not take that chance, not even to capture him -- that is if she knew what he was up to.   He felt for certain that she did not.  Besides, he needed to see someone -- two people to be exact before he made his way into the Holy Lands.  The Dianes, , a pair of aging spinsters who made their home in Epicia, were  notorious for their love of gold, gossip and men, in that order.   He was taking a chance, appearing before them alone, and though he was confident he had enough gold to stave them off, he did shiver at the thought.  No man was safe in their presence.  They were man-eaters, in the literal sense.    Known to capture a man and feast on him for days.  The worst part of it all was their deceptive appearance of civility and kindness. An unsuspecting wanderer would fall prey to them easily.  But, Nelson mentally bolstered his thoughts, he was no unsuspecting wanderer.  He'd give them some of the gold Berigordious so graciously gave him to buy his silence and acquiescence and get the information he needed before he went into the dark abyss of the Holy Lands.

There, after the Dianes told him where they were, Nelson would search out the Lost Angels of the Med-dai.  The band of landless, homeless warriors, with allegiance to no one, only out to serve themselves, would kiss Nelson's feet when he offered them the key to what he knew they desired most.  After the Victory War, the lines were drawn clearly in the sand and they became  mortal enemies of both Joseph and Berigordious.   General King had hired their services prematurely promising them riches and land upon completion, but conveniently failing to clue them in on his plans of  treachery, as if they would have objected!  Well, when it was all said and done, not only had they gone away empty handed, but they had lost some of their best men in the battle.  Though it was never proven, rumor had it that Prince Michael had single handedly killed a man,  one who's death he could never be forgiven for -General Sneddon's son.   For a chance to get his hands on Prince Michael, Nelson knew, General Sneddon would do anything.  The Med-dai would take what Berigordius had promised him, and in addition, exact their revenge on Prince Michael once and for all.

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Elizabeth stood in her prayer room before a massive rock that had been chiseled down and flattened to resemble an alter.    On its face was the imprint of  two hands, one large and one small.  Elizabeth took her left hand and placed it in the smaller one.  Seconds later a blinding light filled the room and a vision appeared like magic before her eyes.

She saw a young Saniia, laughing and carefree, playing in a village with a group of other children.  Then the scene changed, she was in a carriage, looking out from the back at the group of children, her mouth turned down into a frown.  The image zoomed into her face, their were tears falling from her eyes.  Then she was in the DeRoss castle, roaming sadly from room to room, jumping as the guards passed by and leered at her, so alone.  Then she was sneaking into the tunnels.  She saw her laughing with the man sculpting the sculpture which now stood in  her halls.  She saw a man with caring eyes,  sitting on a swing tied to a tree and then standing on it, and then jumping into the air and doing three flips until he landed with precision on his feet.  She saw the same man fastening ropes to a tree and then hoisting Saniia up in the air until her body was swinging wildly through the air, somersaulting with carefree abandon.  She saw Saniia flying through the air over a huge net; she was laughing in delight.  Then she saw an older Saniia, in the castle again.  She was seated a the dinner table, her face stoic, serious and wary.   Surrounded by guards, her eyes darted from side to side and she held her shoulders rigid.  Then everything completely changed.  She saw a battle scene and Michael fighting like a demon.  His sword reached up and slashed at a man before him, Elizabeth shuddered.  In the distance she saw an older man, with the same weak jaw and receding hair line as the man Michael had cut down.  He screamed to the heavens in agony as he watched his son's body fall to the ground.  Then the battle scene faded and night fell.  She saw Saniia again, now skulking in the darkness, though she barely recognized her.  She was  dragging the lifeless body of the guard into the bushes, a guard who had moments before stood guarding the tent where Michael was being held captive by General King's men.  She saw her dipping into this tent, her head shorn, her voluptuous body completely camouflaged in her boy's clothes.    Finally she saw young Nelson, on her most prized Stallion, heading East towards Epicia, towards the Dianes.  Diane of the Diamond and tribe and Diane of the Sawyer clan -- she knew them well.  She hoped they tore him into pieces and made a nice savory stew of him.  But her visions did not show her that.  They ended with flames, tall and orange as far as the eye could see.  Then the flames engulfed the screen and disappeared.

Lifting her hand off the stone alter she trembled with rage.  It was rare that a vision could affect her so, but she was actually frightened.  She sighed and took a deep breath.  It was the last thing she wanted to do but she had to go to their chamber.   She had to warn them and tell them what?  She saw what had happened and saw Nelson running to the Dianes, but she could not see past that point.

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86 Responses to “Tame the Wild Cobra Chapter X – Sneak Preview”

  1. Colette says:

    WOW this is going to be a great chapter, what a little evil dwarf Nelson is :lol:

    There's going to be a huge battle, I'm worried what's going to happen, PM and Saniia need to kill him and have peace, I hope all the BIG problems surrounding them afre over soon!

    I am also worried that when the "DO IT" for the first time that the story will end, please don't let that be Sabine :cwy:

  2. AnniesNotOK says:

    Uh oh, Nelson has been humiliated and now is really angry and looking for some trouble. I said this, but I say it again, please introduce him Melissa.

    He couldn't understand for the life of him why women swooned when they spoke about him - You wouldn't understand it, boy, so leave it alone.

    The Dianes – LOL, sad, but LOL anyway.

    General Sneddon’s son. Oh no, oh no! Sabine, was it necessary to introduce this … ugh, I don’t even have words.

    I love the way Elizabeth recalled (almost for us, it was like a little summary) all their story.

    Oh, oh, so are you suggesting that Queen Elizabeth is going to stop them from… uuuuuh?

    *scrolling down like a stupid wishing to find some more lines to read, please please please*
    :shocked:

  3. Ameera says:

    Aha Sabine!!!!!!! a Twist!!!

    Now we all thought Saniia was gunna get some in this chapter, but no maybe not, maybe yes we dont know. YET!

    Ayeee first to comment, ahh its makes my day.

    I really did think that Nelson was gunna leave, and not hear from him again, but life can't be that good&&easy right?? Haha

    Wait im the not the first to comment. Ughhh that sucks. Just know that im thinkin and seeing while wriiting. It's like im talking on screen. haha

    But Sabine whats gunna happen. Come on just give a little taste. LMAO.

  4. Ameera says:

    wait im not even second. Im third. Im the one witht he hairy chest now ):

    Ooooohhhhhhh nice eye AnniesNotOK. It's big kind of reminds of of Sabah/Saniia haha

  5. Ameera says:

    LOL. Okay im making alot of comments today, You guys dont know what the hairy chest means????

    First is the worst
    Second is the Best
    Third is the one with the hairy chest
    Fourth is the one with the gold chest
    So on and so on

  6. AnniesNotOK says:

    Ameera, girl, thank you! :blush: But no, Sabah's eyes are too beautiful!

    a little taste? - uh oh, pun intended there?

    I'm sure that's what Sabine wanted, right? To make us doubt until the very last moment. Sabine, I don't have nails left right now, please! How do you expect me to write a comment with my stumps??? LOL

    No huge battles, oh no, "We're lovers, not fighters"!

  7. Colette says:

    is the full chapter coming up today??? Is it? come on please!!!

  8. AnniesNotOK says:

    Yeah, Colette, what does it mean incoming shipment? The sneak preview or the full chapter?

    Gold chest?
    I see Michael everywhere...
    :whistle:

  9. Colette says:

    @AnniesNotOK I hope that's what it means, that it will be up today, :wassat: I don't want to get too excited :silly:

  10. Colette says:

    Looks like Sabine is in hiding :ninja:

  11. AnniesNotOK says:

    LOL - No, she's probably busy (although I'm starting to doubt if she really enjoys watching us at the peak of our addiction). I know either being up today or later, it will be worth the wait (as always, otherwise). This reminds me that I still have to formally comment on the last chapter!

  12. Frodes says:

    You know what??? I don't even know why I bother reading these sneak previews. Seriously.

    It's like how this guy described to me why he doesn't go to strip clubs and get lap dances.

    "It's like you give them all this money and you get totally aroused and have a raging hard on but there's no pay off. What's the point???"

    WHAT IS THE POINT SABINE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

    :wink: :wink: :wink:

  13. Sabine says:

    (although I’m starting to doubt if she really enjoys watching us at the peak of our addiction

    Don't doubt it!

    I love it :devil:

    The incoming shipment IS the preview -- you guys are insatiable!!!

  14. Sabine says:

    I'm back! :biggrin:

    The preview IS the incoming shipment -- you guys are incorigilble!! :tongue:

    All good things come to those who WAIT! :ninja:

  15. Colette says:

    Oh OK, I admit it we are insatiable :lol:

    I bet your face looks like this right now :getlost:

    :lol:

  16. Sabine says:

    Frodes, Frodes, Frodes, don't you get it?

    THIS is the point!!!

    It's all about the tease!

    And I bet your friend STILL goes to the strip clubs! :lol:

  17. Gracie says:

    OOOOOOOOO...a free sample! I LOVE free samples! sabine, you're better than the Avon lady! :lol:

    now I don't even CARE if they do it or not cuz we got some DRAMA! OMG me and Annie will soon be typing with a pencil in our teeth! I can't wait!! I know i HAVE to wait but i can't!! :silly:

    OK, CoCo right above the comment box is distracting me... :lol: hmmmm..he's not lookin' so bad...did i ever mention i married a redhead...LOVE freckles!

    OOO, maybe a fight..damn that Nelson... swords clashing, blood shed, Michael the warrior...and those Dianes...and Sneddon!? :sick: we got all kinds of trouble brewing now don't we...waiting on the edge of my seat !!!!Damn I am gonna have to stock up on the LCC till this one gets "birthed"!

    Ameera, I don't know if anyone else got the "hairy chest" but i was LMAO when i read that! :lol: ...awww, you are cute anyway, hair and all!

  18. Sabine says:

    Gracie, happy and laughing instead of this:

    Hmm, *whispers to assistant* Check the dosage of Gracie's next hit, 'kay.

    :devil:

    I see you love the drama, huh? :whistle: I'll give you drama!

    :ninja:

  19. Gracie says:

    whoo! Girl, i LOVE a good page-turner and i am super STOKED right now!i am like night-before-Christmas excited! :silly: ...but don't worry it will wear off and i'll be whiny and desperate and main-lining the LCC eventually! :lol:

  20. Sabine says:

    Ahhh, that's more like it! Gracie :wink:

    But wait, Annie wants drama or no drama -- or it the sex she wants? Hmmmmm

    :whistle:

  21. Frodes says:

    I'll be honest. I want the sex.

  22. Frodes says:

    LOL!!! God, I am freaking hilarious.

  23. Sabine says:

    Here you go Fro:

    I'm glad you crack yourself up!

  24. Frodes says:

    *Sigh*

    Not THAT hot sex!!!

    I want HOT, STEAMY Prince Michael and Sanaii sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Is that too much to ask for??? Apparently, it is!!!

    :wink: :wink: :wink:

  25. musicnme says:

    I'm not going to read the preview. I will wait. I am patient. I am in control plus I want them to take their time and give it to me slowly. Sloooooooooooowlyyyyyyyyyyyyy! Don't you girls get enough stimulation and hot sex from CM? :angel:

  26. Shaz says:

    Hmm, it's not looking good for the option I voted for in the poll... :wassat:

    p.s. where's the sex? lol :biggrin:

  27. Frodes says:

    LOL, god we are a silly crowd aren't we???

    Of course there's enough sex in CM and the story as a whole is phenomenal and I LOVE it!!!

    (It's just that when you're going through a dry spell the sex scenes REALLY make your day. :wink: )

  28. Sabine says:

    Yay, Shaz, you're officially addicted now. Boy, you guys are a lusty bunch aren't yah?

    All except Musicnme, who is trying abstinence. :biggrin:

    But ahhhh, that doesn't work. :whistle:

  29. EnolaLee says:

    Hi Sabine,
    You know, when I went to bed last night I was actually wondering what happened to Nelson.
    LOL! I think it's fair to say that your sneak peak answered the question.

    Reading the first word of the sneak preview (Nelson) I went "Oh no!", and then rubbed my hands expectantly. Okay, I know it sounds contradictory, but it is quite simple: Poor Michael and Saniia. They have to fight for their love on so many different levels, but good gracious, it's so good to be a reader with all that trouble brewing!

    Will be waiting for the full shipment in equal measures of fear and anticipation!
    Please, send a barrel of the LCC my way to calm my nerves while I'm waiting, will you?

  30. Katie says:

    :ninja: There must be something wrong with my ears, did anybody say the words "sex" and "enough" in the same sentence here?

    Argh, the sneak preview indicates trouble brewing, again... Can´t they all give Saniia and PM some (looooong) time alone?

    Sabine, will the poll have any influence?

  31. Sabine says:

    Hey Katie the short answer is YES!

    :devil:

    I already :tongue: :getlost: ordered and rec'd a ship load of Liquid CobraCrack this afternoon in anticipation of the rush on the bar!

    :whistle:

  32. Katie says:

    OMG, may we vote more often than once?

    :tongue: I misread that Elizabeth saw Saniia in a carriage as Saniia IS IN carriage and thought that was a very strage english wording for she is pregnant, LOL, LOL.
    Wishful thinking since that would mean they´d already done it....

  33. Sabine says:

    :happy:

    You want the pregnancy w/o the sex? Awwww, that's sweet Katie!

    I don't think you can vote more than once, but you can change your vote :wink:

  34. Katie says:

    Noooooooo, I want them to have sex so badly, that I would have even forgiven them if they already had w/o us watching!!! :lol: :whistle: :heart:

  35. Sabine says:

    What a funny way to put it "us watching"!
    :biggrin:

    I never thought of it like that before!!!

  36. Katie says:

    Sabine, if you add the responses on the first and last answer together *cough cough*, the results SEX : NO SEX in the next chapter are 13 : 13, totally in balance....

    Ooooh, can´t wait to see what will happen!!!

  37. Sabine says:

    I know, isn't it funny? :happy:

    Of course, I already know what happens but i love to make you wait! :devil:

  38. MartiniGirl says:

    hmmmmm

    I have read
    I have no comment....YET

    ACK!

  39. Ingridje says:

    Patiently waiting but LMAO with all those comments !! Did somebody say there was enough sex ??? *shaking head* tsa tsa tsa !! No girls, there can never be enough sex. But I still want them to fall in love first ... lol... but of course that doesn't mean there are no other ways. *whistles* Ooh ooh, my imagination is running wild !! He can teach her a lot without doing "IT", can't he ?
    And this Nelson guy... what's he doing here ? Trying to kidnap her ? Because there will be not other way that she will go with him !! Of that I'm sure !! PM, please gard her with your life, and your body... LOL
    :angel:

  40. Ingridje says:

    :unsure: After the last preview, you let us wait +/- 3 days, so do we have to wait until sunday ???
    :cwy: Please please please please not on sunday... I have to work on monday and when you post, it's mostly after midnight here in Belgium... I want to enjoy it !!
    Of course you are the boss... LOL :heart:
    I'm just being impatient...don't mind me... :whistle:

  41. musicnme says:

    *whisper* If I need a quick Mikegasm I re-read a chapter of CM. :whistle:

  42. Ingridje says:

    @music : don't we all ? :whistle: :devil:

  43. AnniesNotOK says:

    OMG Ingridje, same here!! LOL - Damn timezones!

    Sabine girl, I told you, you should start another business arm of this strategy, look at people re-reading chapters to get Mikesgasms... CM as a comforter(?) !! Ok, I must confess I re-read too...

  44. Ingridje says:

    LOL.... I started to re-read them all a week ago. Every night another chapter !! I'm gonna learn them by heart so that when I get bored at work, I can dive in my memory and enjoy !! :wub:

  45. AnniesNotOK says:

    Awww... I know! You can always discover something "new", well, not new, but that you focus on now, that you think it wasn't there but now with the other chapters takes another meaning, or more powerful or... awww...
    :wub:

  46. musicnme says:

    @Ingridje

    Okay so our nether region should be cool (right?) until Sabine gives us another supply . :lol:

  47. Sabine says:

    INDGRIDJE: I started to re-read them all a week ago. Every night another chapter !! I’m gonna learn them by heart so that when I get bored at work, I can dive in my memory and enjoy !!

    MUSICNME: *whisper* If I need a quick Mikegasm I re-read a chapter of CM. :whistle:

    OMG Ingridje, same here!! LOL – Damn timezones!

    Sabine girl, I told you, you should start another business arm of this strategy, look at people re-reading chapters to get Mikesgasms… CM as a comforter(?) !! Ok, I must confess I re-read too…

    Good morning ladies! Annie, Ingridje, Music,!!!

    OMG, music to my ears! :wub:

    Do you guys ever notice anything different?

    Sometimes I change little things, no to take away from the story, but just to make it better -- what I call tweaking :wink:

  48. Sabine says:

    INGRIDJE :unsure: After the last preview, you let us wait +/- 3 days, so do we have to wait until sunday ???
    :cwy: Please please please please not on sunday… I have to work on monday and when you post, it’s mostly after midnight here in Belgium… I want to enjoy it !!
    Of course you are the boss… LOL :heart:
    I’m just being impatient…don’t mind me… :whistle:

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    :biggrin:

  49. Sabine says:

    ANNIE: Awww… I know! You can always discover something “new”, well, not new, but that you focus on now, that you think it wasn’t there but now with the other chapters takes another meaning, or more powerful or… awww…

    :wub: :wub:

    MUSICNME: Okay so our nether region should be cool (right?) until Sabine gives us another supply .

    :wassat:

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