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Apr
2010
We’re at Chapter 20!!!! Tell Us Your Favorite Parts of Cowboy Mike – NO not the sex!
It's about that time again!!!! While I'm finishing up the next chapter of TTWC, I wanna hear about your hands down, all time favorite parts of the last twenty chapters of Cowboy Mike, and no, no I don't want to hear about the sex (if you can resist) 
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Stranger in Moscow left her's at the bar and gave me the idea. I love to hear you guys talk about the portions of the story that touched you the most. Here's what she has to say, after reading like crazy over the past two weeks. Thanks Stranger in Moscow!!!!********************************
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"So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee." W. Shakespeare
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What do you mean no sex.... okay fine - but there is sex in the scene - but that is not what I like... it is the conversation
I will only give you one for now - coz you know I like to think abou these..
Perhaps the sexiest conversation ever comes from RWY starts with:
You have my baby growing in here?
All the way through to
I think we'd make some beautiful babies.
My heart was beating like made the entire time...
I like the entire conversation they have in "Rock With You" chapter. What MartiniGirl just said
"Do you have my baby growing in there"
"What if I get you pregnant" ((Oh how sexy and nasty)
Sabine, I'll have to get back to you, this could take time, and I gotta go, bye.
Oooooh, I mean if its the sex that has touched a person, then so be it. But I love to hear what parts of the dialogue and story really touches a person. LIke how did it relate to the person's life or inspire them. What made you laugh, laugh, laugh, or cry, cry, or feel like they were so in love or excited to read more. . . .
Like the scene you mentioned awwwwwweeeeeeee. Okay I can't wait to read the others!
Oh by the way Sabine
I've seen that picture before, I don't think Michael is really sitting next to that girl, its just someone who must have merged two pictures together. For a moment I thought you were giving us a glimpse at what Sabah looks like. But that could be almost anyone.
Of course it's Sabah, Sonia!
YOu know every picture I put up relates to the story. Why would I put up a picture of some random girl?
Oh, and they are together in the picture, Bill took that picture of Sabah and Michael when they were leaving the restaurant that time.
Sonia, it's so funny you said that...because the other night I was trying to google a picture of what I thought Sabah looked like...lol. I kept googling 'French creole and Liberian mixed people" lmbo. Of course only one or the other came up. I have a silhouette in my head of what I think Sabah looks like, but just not a face. I know her hair is long, and I'm assuming it's natural, since she said it poofs out when Its not in a ponytail, because mine does that..lol
Sabine, here are my favorite moments:
'If you gave me free wings'
"I miss you girl....I'm inda bed....I'm on the phone talking to my baby" (Their 1st phone convo after they 1st met)
'Girl, why are you jumping up and down giving everybody a show?'
'Do they know you in Mexico?' (lmbo)
'I was hoping you could write a song to make my mother love me". (clutches chest while sobbing)
'Michael, I didn't expect to see you here'..... 'I bet' (when Mike saw Sabah walking with Jonathan)
'Ask about Jackie for me?" (Kit...lol)
I love the part when he 1st came to her home and made love to her, and she cried and she didn't want to tell him what was wrong as he held her face him his hand.
I like the part when Holoma put her on blast about loving Mike, and she was too shy to look at him or say anything...then she avoided him.
I like when he showed up unexpectedly early at her apt while he was on tour: 'Open the door Sabah!' (swoon)
And I love the sweet moments when he watched her sleep, or sketched pictures of her.
I also love the scenes with him and Sabah's niece. Him asking Pierre all those questions about marriage and fatherhood. And Pierre and Abena running to the car to get all their stuff for Mike to sign. lol
I know someone mentioned the part with Bubbles being funny...I actually took Sabah's side with that one because I found him to be very annoying, and wished he wasn't there to ruin a forthcoming sex scene. And I could literally smell his shyt through my screen. lol
I loved the parts with Latoya, and was like grinning when I read she was listening in on Sabah and Mike.
Ok, I will stop here, because I will end up writing the whole book ...lol
Awwwww, that's a lot Pinkfrosting! I love it. I had the most trouble w/ Pierre, I jsut didn't feel i was capturing him so I'm glad when people say that liked that scene -- you stopped about half way through though. I'ma wait for the comment about the last ten chapters!!!!
OMG, i forget to comment about you looking for Sabah! I've googled Sabah and Michael Jackson myself, just to see what comes up.
I thnk I'm half expecting to see a picture of them at an amusement park!!!! *falls on the floor*
I will have to come back after thinking over the whole thing to comment here but Sabine i was laughing because i saw that picture and i was like no no no that's not Sabah! because you know how when you are reading a novel, you have a mental picture of the characters and I realized that somehow in my mind's eye when i'm reading, Sabah looks like you! maybe it's because i see your little smiling face all over here all the time, i don't know but it's too late for me to change it now
Hey Sabine.
I know I know...but I didn't want to take up the whole space...lol
Ok oh my gosh. No, you explained Pierre perfectly. In my head I actually see someone similar to Travis Barker from Blink 182, but taller. Travis was a definate sweetheart when I watched his reality show, and Pierre reminds me of him with his rough exterior and mushy insides. :-D
Pierre is actually a favorite character of mine
Hmmm...the other parts I like are when they shopped in the furniture store and she kept making snarky remarks at Mike, so he told he had to shut her down.
I liked when they had the fight over the phone. ( Him in the bathroom talking to Melissa, and she to Johnathan)
I also could relate to the part about Melissa checking her out in the dance studio...and knowing Sabah was his woman out of all the girls there.
I also cried at the part when she left Mike the voicemail crying. When he ignored her for a couple weeks.
The part on the boat when he shoved the fruit in her mouth when she kept asking questions.
I really really really liked the parts with him and the baby. Esp when he was super excited to watch her when Sabah and Abena went out. I also thought it was so sweet when he hummed for her, and the baby watched him intently, because I imagine that's how all babies were with Mike. Kinda like in that movie City of Angels, and all the children knew Nicholas Cage was an angel.
I like the part when he told her that she was his, and nobody was gonna take her away from him... *cough* sex scene..lol
Stopping myself again before I get carried away.
Awwww look at Sabah w/ michael she looks so pretty!!!
LOL.
`Ummmm my fave parts???? well there is so many how can i choose.
1. I like in Chapter three when Sabah asked michael if he brung any other girls to the ranch.
2. In chapter three when Michael said you better get you butt in this room and sabah said i refuse.
3. I liked when Michael came by Sabah's house for the first time and Sabah was juming up and down in the window.
4. i liked when Sabah almost drowned in the water
5. Of course I LOVE LOVE LOVE the movie theatre scene. it was so intense.
6. I liked when Sabah and michael went to Hawaii (Yes the WHOLE chapter)
7. I liked when Abeena came into town with her baby and husband
8. I liked when Sabah && Michael had their heart2heart talk. It was really sweet
9. I liked when michael was looking in the mirror at his skin and he was explaining how he felt
Those are my top 9. LOL. but the reason i chose those because they meant the most to me and they stuck out in my head, they really showed the growth of the characters especially the growth of michael&&sabah as a whole.
My favorite character is Sabah like come on. But it's not just because she is the leading lady but because she is funny, she's a lil baby, she makes me mad at her and think she is so retarded for some of the decisions she made but then i love her because she is strong and she sticks up for herself! LOL
PF, girl why you keep stopping yourself?
LOL, when you wrote "the part on the boat when he shoved the fruit in her mouth" -- I was like, which part was that?
wow, I'm so touched that Pierre is one of your favorite characters. I struggle with him and Holoma and Holokai, because I could see them so clearly in my head and I wanted to capture them exactly!
So thanks for that!
I forgot about that part when Sabah cried on the phone -- and he showed up right after, right awwwwwweeeeeeee! Michael!!!!!
That's an awful feeling isn't it, when you see the man you were with, with someone else and you KNOW it's over, Pooooor Melissa!!!!
My favourite part is the part where it began and my least favourite part is where it ends. :)
Girl, why you made me a list -- you're supposed to just talk about it.
LOL @ I like wen Sabah almost drowned in the water -- really?
that's terrible!
Now why does Sabah get on your nerve? She's cool people!!!!!
You mean you don't get annoyed with Michael and his food under the bed?
I like list better Sabine. -___-
i liked when sabah drowned because it was intense. duhhhhh lmao
I said sabah gets on my nerve because of some of the decisions she makes. Didn't u read that up there. haha (:
Haha Michael never let any food under MY bed!!! Sabah told me that he does that quite often. LOL good thing i dont have to deal w/ that.
:shocked: Fuh real?
What you know that I don't know?
Ameeeeeerrra, you TALK to Sabah???? Get outttta here!!!!!
I hate when it ends at every chapter. :) It should be the never ending story. Even though one of the best parts of a book is when a story ends and you're left with that feeling of fulfillment. Then 5 min later you're wondering and hoping if its a series and it has a sequel lol.
Summertime, OMG, I feel the same way!!! That's why I don't like the Kindle. I like getting to the last pages, my heart is beating, I'm excited and sad and worried and then that's it!!!! And I'm like awwwwwwwwwweeeeee!!!! Then if a sequel comes out it's like revisiting w/ an old friend!!!!!
Wow, some assignment ! Where shall I start ? I love each and every chapter of this great love story ! But if you want us to choose, I'd say my favorite part is where he takes the decision of marrying her. He realizes that when he marries her, his troubles will be so much easier to bear. This touches me very much ! True love, it is !
Lmbo Summertime. Now that's a good one! I'm sad when the chapter ends as well.
Sabine, the part with the fruit is on the boat. And you're welcome (about Pierre)
I liked how you captured Joe and katherine really well also. Esp when Antoinette's drama queen self was at the house.
I like in the 1st chapter when Mike snatched the phone out of Sabah's hand...and she said 'lying comes easy to your lips doesn't it'?
I'm with Maria about the part when he told her to gt her butt outta bed. And then he came and bumped her in the dark hallway.
Of course you know I liked the ice cream parlor scene as well.
There I finally made it to the last chapter...happy now? Lol
I promise you if I type anymore I will take up 4 more pages. You know CM is my fav, esp the first 3 chapters or so. It's like my bedtime story every night...lol
So Sabine, what are you going to bless us with next? Another CM, PM or both?
Yeah PF, like an adult bedtime story, right!!!
Of course I'll bless everyone w/ a new chapter, as soon as it's ready! TTWC is the next one!
Ingridje, hi honey!!! Yay, I'm so glad that you see this as TRUE LOVE -- that's why I like to hear!!!!
LOL, PF, you wrote "maria" and I'm like where is Maria's comment -- you mean Ameera!!!
sab...lol forgive me honey. i have been drugged up...lol allergy meds, pain killers, tea, and I haven't eaten all day.. so im drowsy, and sick as a dog.
Poooor Baby, you need The Force, one hit of that and you're be right as rain. I'm so sorry you're not feeling well. I hope you have someone helping you with the baby
Lol...oh the force would be nice...hehe. He's been in my face all day as I gaze at these pics on here...lol
Its ok, my mom has her today, so I had a good break. I get to be lazy curled up in my blanket.
That's good, PF, the worst thing is to be ill and have to take care of a young child. Just keep staring at Michael's eyes, you'll feel better in no tme!
PF, I'm watching Kate & Leopold, you ever seen it. I love that movie, I've seen it over and over, and Hugh Jackman is *sigh*
OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHMMYYYYGOOOOOOOOOOOOSSHH I wrote like a whole book, it took me forever because I was going back to each and every chapter and then my internet decides to disconnect and it's all GONE!!! I HATE THE INTERNET!!!! dfhidjfkjdngjknfjgbfdkjgbjkfhbjgfbgfid _<
Oooooooooh, no!!!! Are you using Firefox, because it should open your old browser and the saved paged for you, even if you crashed!!!!! But if you're on IE oh no!!!
I'm sooooooo madddd tooooo!!! I want to read what you wrote!!!
I'm so sorry. That happened to me while writing the chapter w/ Pierre -- I thought i was going to die!!!
I used Mozilla and I typed a whole nother book and it disconnected again -_- I'm so beyond pissed right now I will destroy this whole computer. It's not meant to be.
OH its been such a long day....I'm beat!!!
Sabine right now I feel like a kid in school again, who's teacher has given me a huge assignment and I feel like procrastinating.
But still I'll mention one scene I really liked, and I have not looked at the other comments.
I liked that scene when Abena left her baby with Michael and Sabah, and they were trying to feed the baby, and after wards Michael was watching Sabah sleeping with Olivia, and thinking how he wanted this to be his "picture perfect" family, with his little puppy he brought home.
The way Michael puts his hand on Sabah's tummy and wonders to himself how he would love to have his baby growing in there. That was so intimate when a man sees a woman this way, that Michael would love Sabah to give birth to his child.
And of course how can we all forget the ICE CREAM PARLOUR SCENE!!! That was probably the funniest scene in all of the 20 chapters so far!!! I could just see Michael holding on to Sabah and him bent over walking and wobbling behind her. The thought of a young damsel like Sabah with a old man, on who viagra probably wouldn't even work was just EEEWWW!!! But funny at the same time.
aaaawwwwwww, yes, I guess it was not meant to be. FYI, to spare myself the torture, I make sure to copy and save anything midway while I'm writing it! Or I write it on a notepad and copy and paste it into the browser.
I"m sooooooooo sorry Summetime, but thanks so much for wanting to chime in, maybe another day !!!
I tried to copy and paste but for some reason I can't paste anything here. I unno why that is.
Third times the charm...only for you Sabine lol
I love anything that can make me laugh and Sabah and Michael have really made me laugh out loud. I hate it but I also love it when Sabah is being ridiculous and stubborn because it's so funny sometimes. I love all the pranks Michael pulls on Sabah and he's being carefree and himself like how the threw cake at Sabah at the cabin when they first met and they had a foodfight or when he put a bucket of icecold water on top of the door and it fell on Sabah, also when he put Rosie on top of her.
I absolutely love the whole Holomai/Holokai thing. The scene where Holomai tells Sabah that she put something in their soup that will make them get a baby had me laughing so hard. I loved when they said they loved eachother on that trip and Michael's personal conversation with Holokai.
I loved the scene where Kit was tryna figure out how "big" Michael was by using humongous fruit LMAO! I loved the icecream parlor scene soo funny. I died of laughter when Sabah was cussing out the lady behind the counter that saw she was sure michael was a hundred and something percent gay.
I love Sabah's one tear at the end of the chapter baby be mine after they made love. I loved Sabah heartbreaking message to Michael after he wasnt answering any of her calls. I loved Michael and Sabah's heart to heart. I love when she opened up to him and he to her.
I loved that one scene where Michael catched Sabah hugging Jonathan and that confrontation and afterwards she gives him his amazing Peter Pan book present. I love how Michael gets jealous of Jonathan EVEN THOUGH HES GAYYY lol its so ridiculous its funny.
I love any scene having to do with Melissa because you know something's gonna happen.
I love when Jonathan was being rude to Antionette ( that moment belonged to everyone that wanted to slap Antionette)
I loved that scene where Michael was crying to Sabah after they made love and he was talking about how he cant trust anyone and all the responsibilty was on him.
I loved the scene where Sabah had to cook for Abeena and she was freaking out and calling Kit for the SIMPLEST TASKS like I think she asked what was peeling (Im not sure) Omg I died of laughter.
I loved the scene where Michael was holding Abeena's baby and he was watching Sabah sleeping near Olivia ( Ithink that was the baby's name) and picturing their family
I loved when Sabah and michael had their fight in the furniture store and afterwards that was funny
I loved when Michael told Katherine he was gonna marry Sabah <3
I know I missed a whole lot but then I would just be rewriting the chapters :)
Gosh I hope this goes through if it gets deleted OMFG!!! lol
YYEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! phew
Lol excuse me poor grammar I was just rushing to get it all down for the third time like catched??? lol CAUGHT!! oops
To put it in a nutshell
I love the whole first chapter. WHY...
Because....THAT'S WHERE IT ALL STARTED!!! To me the first chapter is like the first baby you have, its so special and you never forget it, but that doesn't mean all the subsequent chapters aren't good, THEY ARE GREAT ALSO.
I love the little moments like when Michael took Sabah to Waterworld USA and after wards they were standing together behind some bushes and he was holding her and kissing her on the forehead and wishing he could be like a normal guy who could just sit on a bench in a park with Sabah.
I also love the whole scene in Hawaii, and how after they made love Sabah cried like a baby in Michael's arms. To me moments like this are more romantic than the actual sex, and Michael says to her "Sabah please stop you're breaking my heart.....you know I'm not going anywhere".
I loved when they had their first heart to heart talk in Sabah's apartment and Michael says to Sabah
Of course I loved that whole scene on the yacht in Rock with You, it has probably been the one chapter that was the most intense for me.
I loved that whole scene when they were eating fruit salad, and then started making love, I loved all the lines, like "would you have my baby......what if I get you pregnant now, OMG.
The way Sabah fell overboard while taking Michael's pictures was the most scariest moment that made me skip a heartbeat. Its not that I liked Sabah falling overboard, but the suspense, the emotions it stirred within me was intense.
I loved how after wards when Michael and Sabah were on board, he took Sabah down to their room and he cleaned her off and was taking care of her like a baby. That whole "going overboard" scene was so intense and then after when they were lying in bed, and discovered amanda and the captain were married, for them to have a conversation after going through an ordeal like that was so heart warming. It showed just how comfortable Michael and Sabah had become with each other, and that they didn't not want an "empty" marriage like their parents.
The way Michael coaxed Sabah lovingly into giving her mother's address and all, so that he could keep a check on her. I loved it because it really showed Michael "being the man" and taking charge to care care of his lady love. I love that in a man.
That time when Sabah and Michael didn't speak to each other for like a week and he sees Sabah with Jonathan and thinks something is going on between them, and Sabah was mad at Michael for taking Brooke to the Grammy's. After when they are in the car alone, and talk after a week, the way Michael puts his head down on the steering wheel and lets tears flow from his eyes saying "You can't do this to me Sabah". I love little moments like this when both Michael and Sabah cry tears, because it really shows how much they are pining for each other and very romantic about it.
I loved it when how they were making love one time and a tear seeped from Sabah's eye and Michael asks
I love all the bit when Michael's looking at Sabah though the window at Havenhurst(?) and she's sat by herself having lunch and he's thinking how beautiful she is
I also like the time when she's trying to explain to Michael that she has a job to do and her independence, unfortunately she is wearing sexy underwear, so Michael isn't really listening
I also like the time when they are on the boat together and she is taking photos of him - he is so sweet as he is posing for her - and she takes terrible photos
I love all of it really
From Chapter 1
"O yes very much"
"A
Sabah: "Yeah I'm listening"
This diologue between Michael and Sabah has got to be one of the most sexiest ones, in all of the 20 chapters in my opinion.
I think it was the Chapter 2
When Michael and Sabah go out on a full moon night and are sitting by the lake under a tree and Sabah want's to know if she is the first girl he has brought to the ranch and Michael gets mad at her for cracking a joke about her writing a book about them. Again little things like this can really make spark for me. There was something very cute, sexy and romantic all at the same time about the way Michael got annoyed and looked as though he was about to ride off without Sabah. It just occurred to me that Michael got mad at Sabah for saying that because, in such a short time he had taken a real liking (maybe even loving...just didn't know it) to her. You only get mad at someone like this if you really love them and have deeply started feeling for them. The thought that this person could betray you, can be very heartbreaking and the thought of it unimaginable. So I guess Michael really did fall in love with Sabah right from the start, only he just didn't know it. Otherwise what drove him to take her to the ranch and DO ALL THOSE THINGS WITH HER. I don't think it would have happened if it was any other girl??? That's just my opinion.
I loved how he tells Sabah when they are back home later on why he took Sabah to the ranch.
Sabah..."no why"
Michael..."because I was lonely" (((sigh))) OH MICHAEL!
okay i've been doing some thinking but i stayed up way too late watching SNL and cleaning so now i'm too tired to list all my favorite parts . so just in general, i love all the little moments between sabah and michael that make them such a real couple and really show their personalities , i loved the whole Hawaii trip and the whole part with Sabah's sister and the pregnancy drama..AAAH there are just too many to count ! but when i think back without actually rereading here's number one for me, the part i think of first and remember affecting me the first time i read it and i had to look it up so i could quote you......ddrdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdrdr (drum roll).....
it's the night after the Grammy's, Sabah is mad at Michael and they are in the limo, Sabine considering whether or not to fall in love with him..."he was completely lovable from his curly hair down to his long toes, even his faults were lovable..." Awwwwww. Then there's a luscious description of lovely Michael as Sabah contemplates his existence, a beautiful heartfelt talk from Michael about his philandering father and brothers and he needs so badly for Sabah to believe he would never be unfaithful to her it's just almost painful and then this..."Time stood still and in the next second her breath literally caught as she felt herself falling over the edge of her reality. She actually felt the sensation of falling. She lost her bearings. They were no longer in a car on the way to her house. It was just Michael and her, two people in the universe except now there was an invisible thread connecting his heart to her own. And in that moment she knew , as she knew her own name, that if that connection was ever severed she would cease to exist. " +sigh+
that's just beautiful Sabine. Thank you for sharing with us
HI Sonia, Jenny, Gracie, Gracie! LOL! You called Sabah Sabine
I"m not Sabah!!!! Awww I love reading this thread.
You know, some of the stuff that's being quoted I don't even remember!!
I swear!!!!!! And off the top of your head, that's just great, it's the scenes that have really touched you, right?
Gracie, OMG, when I wrote what you quoted I was like, Wow, did I write that?
It's an amazing experience to have a story come through you. In a lot of ways reading people's reactions to the story and what they love is almost like reading it again -- through your eyes, for the first time.
I really love all the comments!!!!
Summertimes YAY! You finally were able to post it!!!! OMG
love all the scenes you love too! You posted some that I didn't remember too 
Sonia --
You mentioned some parts of the story that others haven't . . . like the scene where they are talking about the Captain and Amanda being married -- wow, never thought of that being memorable. I mean I write it, cause it comes through and says WRITE ME; I BELONG IN THE STORY -- but I don't know why or how it will fit into the whole scheme of things until I start to write . . . like I said, it's amazing to read this story through the eyes of my readers, to see what they thought.
Jenny, yeah I like that scene too, Isn't that just like a man? You're talking to them and they're not listening to you AT ALL!!!!
Luv you guys!!! Keep adding if you think of anything more LOL!!!!
Hi Sabine......... :D this is such a sweet topic.
that pic you got up there is of Michael and Tatiana, right?? He looks soo beautiful and sexy in that pic. I just want to squeeze him. gosh!
anyways, here are my fav. parts..
My favorite parts:
How michael and sabah met. How sweet he was with her when it came to taking care of her feet. Also, the whole "period" incident. haha! i love how grossed out he was
When he bought her a ticket so they could see each other again. That showed to me that right off the bat he had a bond with her and he liked her. That she wasn't like any other girl he's ever met.
I like how he took her on vacation and to the water park. Poor baby mikey is trying so hard to have a normal life with her.
I love how sweet michael was with Abena's daughter. I loved their dinner party and how uncomfy michael was at the beginning. I loved sabah's dancing! hahaha Michael was soo impressed by her.
I love how sabah got sooooooooo jealous of Brook and the whole Grammy awards event.
Oh got Sabine.. I got sooo many more favorite parts but its too much!
I was writing w/e came to my head.
I have been thinking about this for hours. I have come to the conclusion that I do not have a favorite part of the story.
Instead my favotite moment is when I first found Cowboy Mike. It was back in December and I was searcing for MJ pictures on the internet. One of the pictures I found turned out to come from the CCC. At first I did not notice the Cowboy Mike story, but as I closed down the window something caught my eye...and then it was gone. I just knew I had to find it again! It turned out to be Chapter VIII (Leave me alone) which I read in a state of disbelief. Somehow it sounded so real I had a hard time believing it could be anything but a true story...and I am definitely not going into how the sex scenes made me feel.... OMG!
I guess I must be a little ignorant, but that MJ fan fiction even exsisted had never crossed my mind.
Imagine what it was like being thrown right into the Hawaii chapter!
The realization that there were 7 previous chapters out there just waiting to be read was mindblowing.
And the rest is history, as they say.... I have been hanging around the CCC ever since that fateful day in December last year. (Some would probably say that I live here)
No, no Elmira, THAT'S Sabah, girl!
YOu took us waaaaayyyyyyy back to the beginning!!!!! It's funny I think of them as a different couple in the beginning than they are now!!! That's GOOOOOODDDD!
That means they've grown and changed. Do you feel that way, Elmira?
LOL @ Sabah's dance! I forgot about that! And Michael asking her to do that while he was inside of her, oh shoot, I am going against my own rule, talkin about the sex!!!!
It's okay to just write what pops up, that means that's what has stayed with you and I wanna hear about that!
Wow Elona, thank you!!!!! You remind me of when I was a little girl, the first time I got a library card, the librarian told me I could take out ten books! You don't know how happy I was!!!!! Then I realized that my favorite book, The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe was part of a series!!!!
I realized that it was the third book and I had what, seven or eight that I could read. I felt like I had found GOLD!!!!! It's such a beautiful treasured memory!
I always wonder how people "end" up here, what are they looking for. What a story Elona!!!!! I like this one as much as I like your story about the Copenhagen concert!!!! You have such a way w/ words! I can't believe English is not your first language!
Oh, by the way, I didn't tell anyone about the room in da Recovery Room with the name ELONA on the door, it's our secret!
Hi Sabine,
Thank you for your comment on my English. You just made me blush...
A door with my name on it?
Wow, I am going there right now - and I am taking my favorite Michael with me. (My favorite Michael is the one I always seem to return to...)
He was a masterpiece in all ages, but this one is my favorite!
Elona, it's the one with this sign on it
Awwww, Neverland Valley...
Sabine, you are reading my mind!
*jumping up and down*
I've gotta go! I can't wait!
Have fun!!!!!!
I don't usually comment on here but this time I really have to! :)
See,I have soooooo many favorite moments but the first thing I think about when hearing Cowboy Mike, is this scene when he's in the car with Sabah and I think they're leaving Kit's apartment, you know after Sabah watched the grammys I think. I really love that moment in the car when she's staring at him and thinking that she can leave, that she has a choice and can easily walk away. But she decides to be with him! And I love how he notices her staring at him and asking her why and she denies it haha:) That scene really got to me, it's just something about it that I can't describe, It's beautiful, and that's also when I knew I was an addict LOL!
This is by far the best written and most addicting story I have ever read, and I will remember it for the rest of my life. I mean, CM (and TTWC) makes all the other fanfics seem corny!!