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04 May 2010

Cowboy Mike XXII Sneak Preview!

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The car pulled into the parking lot and Sabah hiked up her tight, dark skirt, careful not to rip the inch split in the back.   As she stepped out of the car she caught a flash of gold in her peripheral vision.  She didn't know what made her notice it or what made her stop but something told her to turn around and look a little closer.  Well, she did and it took about a half a second for her to recognize who it was that she was looking at.   Jogging as best as she could in her high heels, she caught up with Melissa as she was sticking her keys in her car door.

"Excuse me."  Sabah called out, even before she had reached her.  To Melissa, the clatter of her heels on the pavement were ominous.  When Melissa didn't answer Sabah called out a  little louder.   "Excuse me!"

Melissa hesitated and looked in Sabah's direction but she didn't stop or turn around to acknowledge Sabah in any way.    If anything she tried to open her car door faster but Sabah had already caught up to her.  She arrived at her side, slightly winded and gave Melissa a leveled look.

"Melissa, right?"

"Yes," Melissa replied apprehensively.  The last thing she wanted to deal with this morning was a confrontation.   She tried to do so inconspicuously, but she couldn't help but take in how Sabah was dressed and she kicked herself for pulling on an old pair of jeans, a dusty pair of sneakers and a simple T-Shirt this morning.  Right about now she'd kill for some heels, if only so she could look Sabah in the eye.  As it were, Sabah was dressed  to kill in an obviously designer suit, tailored to accentuate every curve on her shapely body.  If Melissa didn't feel intimidated enough, the fact that she towered over Melissa in her two inch heels was even more daunting.  The dark color and the simple lines of the form fitting skirt and jacket made Sabah look elegant while Melissa felt frumpy and unwanted.   She came in hoping to catch a minute with Michael and though she knew he was there, he had avoided her like the plague.   Thirty minutes she hung around and not once did he come out of his office, not even to say hi.

Sabah's penetrating  glance spoke for her, even before she said a word.  Considering what had just happened, Melissa couldn't help but feel small.  She felt like hired help being cornered by a VIP business exec.  And Sabah looked like she meant business, too.  Melissa swallowed.   It didn't take a rocket science to guess what this conversation was going to be about.

"Sabah Graham,"  Sabah held her hand out with confidence and Melissa hesitated before giving her a weak hand shake.  Sabah's grip though was firm, and as soon as she released Melissa's hand she pinned her with an accusatory glare.   Her tone though remained misleadingly disinterested.

"Um, what are you doing here?"  . . . .

Meanwhile, the driver who had driven Sabah there peeped his head into Bill's office.  Michael was laughing at something Bill had said and Bill was still talking when he interuppted them.

"Heads up guys.  Mr. Jackson,"  The driver nodded at Michael respectfully.  "Bill, Ms. Graham is here, and unfortunately she spotted a woman leaving -  Melissa, right?"  The driver glanced at Michael.   When he saw Sabah run away from the front door towards Melissa, he made a mad dash for Bill's office immediately.  He knew who Sabah was and Melissa -- well, she'd been sniffing around Michael for a couple of weeks now.   "They're in the parking lot, um, having a discussion."

The guard wasn't even able to get the last words out before Michael sat up in his chair.  "What?"

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293 Responses to “Cowboy Mike XXII Sneak Preview!”

  1. musicnme says:

    BTW Sonia, that comment is with L.O.V.E. :wub: :wub: :wub:

  2. Sabine says:

    Hey Ms. J!!!!!! Who me tricking, nahhhhhh :angel:

    I'm just having fun!!!!!

    I think telling someone who wants to be with you that you don't want to be with them is the worst feeling in the world, and I have no problem with confrontation!!!

    It's just awkward and so uncomfortable because the person is basically offering you their love and you're saying no thank you :sad:

  3. msjanice305 says:

    Yes you Sabine!

    For some reason the new chapters are never what it seems after reading those previews.

    Sabah confronting Melissa could have just been a dream or something.

    Please put us out of our misery already. You know how to keep us addicts interested.

  4. deedeeluvmike says:

    FIRST of all there's not going to be any altercation between Sabah and Melissa because mike is a LOVER NOT A FIGHTER... :wub: :wub: :wub: .

    Second mike may pass out if there's is one [ hates confrontation dont like seeing anyone hurt] huh! maybe he should have thought about that BEFORE he COBRA'D Mel

    ANDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD :blush:
    :wub: LASTLY Sabah's and Mel's confrontation went aa little something like this..........

    Borrowing Sabine;s line SABAH: '' um what are you doing here''!?! MELISSA: '' came to see a friend, what's it to you''? [ she answers trying to be brave ]LOL SABAH THINKING *i know this heifer did not just say that to me* then responds'' your FRIEND would not just happen to be my man is it?'' MELISSA: ''who IS your man? SABAH :'' michael'' MELISSA : ''michael?'' SABAH '' yessssssssssss,MICHAEL JACKSON THE KING OF POP; THAT MICHAEL, know him now?'' MELISSA: '' i did not know he BELONGED to you'' SABAH: '' NOW YOU DO, SO BACK OFF!'' MELISSA : I'D RATHER HEAR THAT FROM HIM'' [brave aint she?] SABAH : '' well i'm TELLING you mike and i are HAPPY and i do not like THE WAY OYU MAKE ME FEEL chasing him around like that it's embarrassing'' MELISSA: was SPEECHLESS, her stomach was full of BUTTERFLIES she turned and SABAH continued ''DONT WALK AWAY i'm not done'' MELISSA: but i AM and with a SMILE on her face she got in her car and drove away, playing MJ's JAM on the radio....... :whistle: :whistle: :whistle: :whistle:

  5. Elmira2887 says:

    Sabine........
    no no no.. i dont think michael would like to see sabah and melissa pulling eachother's hair out LOL
    I dont think he would like that at all.. he doesnt like abuse...

    I agree with Sonia.
    Michael is partly at fault too. If he didn't want to start a relationship with melissa then he should have kept his HUGE thingy in his pants okay? Its all michael's fault... he got his hope high and poor melissa is hurt too. she got her heart broken.. cant we give her a break? :O

  6. Sonia says:

    @musicnme

    dear what in the world does that have to do with this??. I was saying that to him with a smile on my face and not abusing or insulting him. Can you explain how that fits in with this? Cuz I don't understand. I call my daughter lovingly my little devil or monkey all the time, does that sound being mean to you? I never abused him or anything. He was feeling very bad about giving her the bug!

    Sabine...sorry you didn't get it, but I still stand by what I'm saying. Let me give you another example and this one is for real. Except for Monday, I've been feeling a bit under the weather and so my hubby has been dropping off and picking up our daughter from school, and he HATES AND DESPISES getting up in the morning, he'd rather pull his skin off than get up early, because he's not a morning person. But he's gonna do that till the end of the week, why because he cares and wants to see me get better quickly and so I have extra rest and all that. Now I didn't make him do it, he did out of his own accord. I woke up on Tuesday and over slept for one hour because I was feeling tired, and I immediately requested if he could take our daughter while I get her breakfast and get her ready. He never said a word and ran! If he didn't care, he'd told me to go to hell right! I know many husbands who are like that. To this day, he has always accompanied me and daughter on all her doctor's appointments and meetings with teachers, I don't make him, he does it out of love.

    That's the same feeling I was getting when Michael wasn't stepping up. Let's forget about Melissa and her feelings for a minute. Agreed that she is not their problem. But if Michael is seeing that Melissa's lurking around is making Sabah uncomfortable then he could at least for Sabah's sake talk to her and then have her thrown in the slammer. Does he care more about Meliissa's feelings than Sabah's. You yourself said, Michael is just trying to avoid paining himself further and he's kinda being selfish in this situation. I understand Sabah can't MAKE him do it, but he loves her, in my opinion he would confront Melissa even if it kills him. I never said Sabah should MAKE him do anything, I feel this realization should come on its own to Michael.

  7. Sabine says:

    Ha, ha, Sonia, it's not that I don't understand what you're saying, it's just that I don't agree AND your analogies don't apply to this situation.

    Your husband WANTS to take your daughter to school. Very simple.

    If he didn't he wouldn't do it.

    Yeah, Michael is being selfish, but so what, none of us are perfect. Remember I saiw shoulda, woulda coulda -- Michael won't do anything unless he wants to no matter how much SAbah demands, cajoles, please or requests.

    I never said Sabah should MAKE him do anything,

    :lol: Sonia!! Yes you did!!!! You said it so many times in so many ways.

    :wassat: Elmira!!! I'm shocked! Why are you blaming Michael for Melissa's decision? She's a grown woman! Some people would say (not me) that she shoudl have kept her legs closed.

    It's just the chance we take when we have relationships -- the chance that it won't work out that way we want.

  8. Sabine says:

    MsJ. that's just like on T.V. right?

    The previews are NEVER what the show is really about!!!!!

    DeeDee, girl you got Melissa driving away smiling in her car like she's a little trouble maker!!!!

  9. Mel says:

    I',ve Been HOODWINKED, BAMBOOZLED, LED ASTRAY!!! LOL! I HAVE BEEN THINKING ABOUT MICHAEL AND SABAH A LOT LATELY. there is a song by Alicia keys that makes me their story A lot it is called, Un-thinkable (I'm ready) I can't wait to read the rest!!!!!

  10. Sabine says:

    Girrrrrrl, I LOVE that song!!!! I'm not hoodwinking anyone! I will put up the chapter . . . . eventually!

    :ninja:

  11. Sonia says:

    :lol: Sabine

    I skimmed my comments and I don't think I used the word MAKE once. If I sounded like that then it was misunderstood by you. I was just wondering why that realization is not coming to Michael on his own. I know no one is perfect and we don't screw up big time every day, but he does need to take responsibility. Its okay to get selfish on small everyday petty things, like Sabah ends up cleaning their condo while Michael just kicks his feet up, LOL!! But to me this is a major thing, and it was partially his doing, so he SHOULD do something about. I guess that's why I was sounding like she should MAKE him take responsibility, because hell yeah he is responsible too.

    Let's just say the most horrifying unthinkable happened, and all of a sudden Sabah decides that having a famous high profile boyfriend like Michael is not worth it and she wants a normal life, and not wanting to hurt him and confront him she disappears without telling him anything, and the next thing Michael sees Sabah with another boyfriend. Don't you think Michael would deserve some explanation, after Sabah showed him dreams that he could have a life with her, she would marry him have his kids. That would seriously be painful. Now let's not say something like oh come on why would she do that its MICHAEL!! Well to Sabah Michael is not the Michael like he is to the rest of the world now is he?? I think everyone would be cursing Sabah if she did that to him.

    :wub: :heart: Good night and lots of L.O.V.E. to everyone.

  12. Sabine says:

    Sonia!!!! Giiiiiiiirl, don't make me quote you!!!! :lol: And saying goodnight, :lol: after you dropped that bomb.

    Your whole premise in this argument was that Michael was making Sabah confront Melissa and leaving her no choice.

    I did not misunderstand you!!!!! :wassat:

    Girl, your view point is subjective. You think Michael SHOULD confront Melissa -- okay, Michael does NOT agree with you. :biggrin:

    You also think that it's a major deal and that remains to be seen.

    As for you analogy, we might think Michael deserves an explanation and Sabah SHOULD give it to him, but only Sabah will decide what she will do, regardless of what we think!!!!!

  13. musicnme says:

    Sonia you didn't say you were smiling or even joking when you originally told us about it so I felt bad for the guy. What does that have to do with this you ask? YOU brought up your relationship on several occasions and told us about your life. No big deal really. :wink:

  14. Sonia says:

    Oh So we can also say why blame Sabah, it was Michael's decision, he's the one who took her to his cabin, and screwed her, so Sabah is in no way at fault. Michael should have seen it coming that millions of women are always after him and so Sabah just appealed more and now that she is tiring of him she wants to move on, since being MJ's girlfriend isn't all its cut out to be and doesn't seem so glamorous anymore. Sabah also owes Michael nothing then I guess? She can have a change of heart whenever she feels like it too.

    Oh and it doesn't matter whether it was just a casual brief encounter between Michael and Melissa and with Sabah it has been a more serious relationship. I don't see why time or the duration of a relationship matters, either way its still painful and we are dealing with human feelings here. I think that's what some people are forgetting.

  15. Sabine says:

    At fault for what, Sonia? I mean, what's the analogy? Michael and Sabah had sex and they both enjoyed each other immensely, no one is complaining!!!
    Oh, I see, this is your hypothetical still!

    Okay, yes, yes, yes, Sabah in your hypothetical has the right to choose to do whatever she wants even if the whole world disapproves!!!!
    How we feel about a matter will never dictate how another person chooses to act.

  16. Sonia says:

    @musicnme

    I don't know what you read and interpreted from my comments. But its no hidden secret to Sabine especially that I had a rocky relationship with my parents.

    Did I ever say I had an abusive relationship with my husband? NEVER! I might have said disagreements, that's not like as if there abuse, shouting yelling and cursing going on back and forth. Oh and he's my hubby by the way you don't need to feel bad about him, I'm there for him, and I don't see how from my comments on the net you could see how I must have said that to my hubby? I have never discussed what all my hubby and I went through to be together, and I don't intend to. I discuss my relationship with my mother alot, because alot of it applies to what Michael went through with his father and Sabine discusses her family as well. I don't remember once saying something negative about my hubby, I would never do that since there is nothing bad to say, otherwise I wouldn't be with him. There are many ladies on here we discuss our husbands, kids and family life, so what's the big deal??? I'm not the only one.

    :lol: Sabine I wasn't saying good night because I'm running away from here, girl I'll be back tommorrow, I can't only take so much for one day. I have to put my daughter to bed, otherwise she won't wake up tommorrow.

    But I have to let you know, in the coming months, I'm not sure we might move out of here, so there might be a period where you might not hear from me, because I'll be on the other side of the world, but I'm not sure, so just letting you know. I don't run like that, LOL!!!

  17. Sabine says:

    Oh, okay, Sonia. I thought you were trying to do the whole, I didn't say that, (even though you did) end of conversation tactic!!! :lol:

    That's bad debating! And it doesn't work with me, girl! :smile:

    Oh, and girl, there's not going to be internet where you're going??? :biggrin:

    I think there's lots of people here posting from overseas!!!!!

  18. Sonia says:

    OH man Sabine

    What is that supposed to mean! I mean until I get settled down and we've moved in, there could be a period where I might not be around for a few days. Girl do you have any idea, we have to sell everything and we can only take our bare belongings like 7 suitcases that too mostly clothes and essentials. In that country the same plugs don't work there, so I'll have to re-buy all our stuff, computer, laptop, I don't think we're gonna take any of it with us. I have huge Thomas Kinkade paintings and I don't know what to do, on top of that the hubby and I were discussing a while back about what to do, we don't have much time, we have to maybe put our house on sale soon, so there is alot of stuff going on. Girl don't mock me like that, LOL!!! But I'm really looking forward to it, its gonna be a step up in terms of quality family life though, but I'm not sure so lets see what happens. All our 10 years of belongings will have to go out the door, its not easy, even our cars have to go, what to do!!!

    I

  19. musicnme says:

    Sonia it's all good. I'll let you continue to be on stage. You can't help it.

  20. Sabine says:

    Sonia, girl, you will be fine! :heart:

  21. MartiniGirl says:

    girls... you need to lean to pace yourselves!
    As my mama Gracie says... Jesus Christmas!
    You gals are outta control on the sneak preview..
    Save something for the chapter...

    Hey speaking of chapter... Sabine WAZZUP??

    :wassat:
    :smile:
    :lol:

  22. Sabine says:

    Whatcha talkin' 'bout out of control!!!! We're just having fun!!!!! :smile:

  23. MartiniGirl says:

    *cough*
    well I know I am adding to the numbers...
    so I am like # 173 on the Sneak Preview...
    The last Chapter - Smile- only has 139...

    CM seems ot have that affect!
    the estrogen is a flowing...

    :blink:

  24. Sabine says:

    Omg, I can't believe people are counting the comments! Well, da bar is over 2,000 and the first chapter of Tame the Wild Cobra only has 19 so go figure!
    :smile: :wassat:

  25. Elmira2887 says:

    Sabine..........
    what i meant to say is that Michael should not have sex with just ANYBODY. Especially if he does not want them to hang out him like a lost puppy. Melissa is a grown woman too and i agree with that. But come on.. we are women and women always wear their hearts on their sleeves. Michael shouldn't lead women on.. its not right.. I mean I'm sure michael knew Mellissa was falling for him.....
    but anyways..
    i cant wait to read the WHOLE chapter

  26. Sabine says:

    :lol: Ooooh, Elmira, I'm all out of arguments!!! I don't think Michael lead Melissa on, I think he just changed his mind!

    :sad: for Melissa

    but :smile: for Sabah!

    :wub:

  27. StrangerInMoscow says:

    WOW! Lot of disagreements here. I'm just gonna comment on the sneak preview.hahaha.
    Oooooo...this will be interesting to see what Sabah says to Melissa.I'm guessing Michael will interfere..who knows!aghhh..eitherway...it'll be really interesting :P wonderful writing can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

  28. StrangerInMoscow says:

    Oh!! Sonia ill be praying for you..I've moved a total of 15 times in my life..I'm in the middle of moving again(its why I haven't been here recently)..-_-
    so I can relate to the stress ur feeling.I hope that everything goes smoothly for you dear<3

  29. Sabine says:

    OMG! Stranger 15 times! I hate moving -- really, you just never realize how much stuff you have until you do.

  30. deedeeluvmike says:

    :wub: G'morning all CCC''s Addicts

    Okay michael was wrong, wrong wrong for the way he behaved toward MELISSA when he met Sabah especially after he already had sex with her [melisssa]

    BUT after she never heard from him for a while, THEN she went and FOUND him at his rehearsals was TALKING with him until he saw Sabah and JETTED [[ lol, the coward] once he did all of that them the ALARMS bells should have been going off in her head that he no longer had any interests in her; i mean if that was me like her? yes i would have been very hurt and extremely pissed at him for playing with my emotions and feelings like that so i probably would have just decked him with my pocket book and walked away after all he may BE MICHAEL FRICKING JACKSON THE KING OF POP but HE'S STILL JUST ONE MAN!

    and even more in relationships there is that possibility that things wont work [ not saying we ever enter one thinking that] but there's no guarantee but i'mm digressing, back on topic......... so she never saw him cant get him to return her calls, he's not answering her messages, she saw him and he walked away from her with his new love interest no less [[ real tacky of MJ] then she WENT to his private HOME one she had to get his BG [ who has since been fired] so ALARMS bells should have Gone off again at this]
    to give her the ADDRESS to since MJ DID NOT GIVE IT TO HER, then he TOLD her in no uncertain terms that she CANNOT come there again WHILE looking worriedly over his shoulder , which should have made her aware that she probably had interrupted him at an Innoppurtune time......

    now i feel bad for her i do, i really do...Mj was a leech ,a cad :devil: for doing her he did, but the writing is there on the wall that he has totally lost interest in her and has moved on.... is what he did to her and the way he did it wrong ? yes, absolutely; did she deserved an explanation from him as to why he WON'T accept, return or talk with her anymore? maybe, depends on what they understood their association together was; seems to me like she was more inti him than he was into her, isnt that what guys do? last i checked Mj was still of the neanderthal men society [ even as lovable as he was lol] so is it farfetched that she misunderstood what they were and is now being hurt by his lack of regard? :dizzy: NO, but chasing him all over the place wont cement him back into her life! one of two things may happen with this confrontation of Sabah's with melissa from MJ's stand point, he may get unbeliavably mad at Sabah for interferring [ to him ii may seem that way since he did not ant her to meet melissa] or he could intervene before Sabah get a chance to DISCUSS anything with Melissa and tell he rhe'll take care of it [[as he should have from the beginning] and be unbeliavably mad at MELISSA for still seeking him out after he told her not to...... :whistle: either way i CANNOT wait to see how it all go down LOL

    SABINEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! :biggrin: WHENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN?!!!!! :wink:

  31. Sabine says:

    OMG, DeeDee, when?

    :wassat:

    You've broken it down so perfectly, I don't even NEED to put up the chapter!!!!

    :whistle:

    :lol: :biggrin: :silly:

  32. deedeeluvmike says:

    :wink: Hi Mommy!!!

    :cwy: you had BETTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR :angry: LOOL :silly:

    GIRLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL i have been waiting for it :w00t: i am very anxious to see what our resident BCM is going to do

    will he , wont he....................?

    does she , dont she....................?

    MY INQUIRING MIND NEEDS TO KNOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :happy:

  33. deedeeluvmike says:

    :wassat: wooooow sabine :shocked: in your poll there are 21 that thinks sABAH SHOULD PUT A BEAT DOWN ON MELISSA i do not agree :biggrin: LOL

    I'M OF TRHE 15 THAT SAYS NO.......................... sabah should however clock MJ :cool: hhahahahahahahahahahah

    :whistle: HE DESERVES THE BD not MELLY

  34. Sabine says:

    DeeDee I think it's 2 to 15 for the beatdown. Seems like CCC addicts are the non-violent type for the most part!

    Now remember, patience is a virtue!!!!!

  35. deedeeluvmike says:

    :wassat: SO SORRY ABOUT THAT LADIES

    :tongue: i have a excuse for the slip-up though ; you see staring at mike's cobra in that gold pants has caused me to be cross-eyed

    therefore i dont see as good as i did before: MAN WHAT WAS MIKE THINKING DONNING THOSE? :silly:

  36. deedeeluvmike says:

    OH :shocked: BTW three times i meant to tell you i am running down to Manhattan so i will see you CCC's later :wink:

  37. Sonia says:

    @deedeedluvmike

    I LOVE WHAT YOU JUST SAID. That's exactly how I feel about it. I don't care if Michael is also MICHAEL JACKSON, he is still a man, and the way I've kinda come down hard on him for this Melissa thing I would have said the same thing for any other man.

    @Sabine....girl when I went away from here last night, and gave it more thought, I was like WOH HO!!!! Michael is full of some double standards or rather there are some double standards that I saw that I never saw before!

    A few people have now said that Michael might get mad at Sabah for interfering with Melissa. I'd like to know why should Michael get mad at Sabah for that??? Do you all remember the time Michael felt so threatened by antoinette that even before meeting her, he TOOK action against her. Yes I said TOOK, and not CHOOSE. Some of you ladies here have said Sabah has CHOSEN of her own to confront Melissa, but when I look back at that chapter Rock With you, to us the readers it might look as though Michael had a choice about NOT to do something about Antoinette as compared to doing something. But looking at it from Michael's point of view he felt so threatened that he had to TAKE action, and I don't think he felt he had a CHOICE. Not only that but Michael had to really coax Sabah into giving her mother's info after putting alot of pressure on Sabah. Sabah eventually did YES give Michael the info, but with much much hesitation, because she felt she was left with no choice. HOWEVER, find this particular action of Michael's very RIGHT and justified, because he felt he was acting in the best interest for himself, Sabah and their relationship. Sabah did not get mad at him for going after her own mother now did she??? Because she knew Michael was doing it out of love, and she's got nothing to hide, however the same doesn't seem to be holding true for Michael.

    Now Sabine my question to you is, with what right and authority did Michael put pressure on Sabah to give her mother's info to her?? I think Michael was ABSOLUTELY right in this case. Sabah has repeatedly asked or requested Michael to giver her Melissa info because she wants to talk to her, since Sabah does feel threatened by her. After many such requests Michael has not complied. Now don't tell me something like well just because Sabah gave her mother's info to Michael doesn't mean he has to do the same thing. YES I do feel that Sabah deserves to be treated equally in this relationship, and have her needs met as well. This is according to your own description of relationships yesterday. The way Michael MADE Sabah give her mother's info to him, I think Sabah had a right to MAKE Michael give Melissa's info to her and let her meet Melissa if that's what she wants to do. WHY! because the same way Michael exerted his right over Sabah because he is her bf and Sabah being the love of his life, has a right over her and their relationship to protect them, don't you think Sabah deserves the same right over Michael.

    Sabine that's what I was getting at yesterday about have a certain degree of right over one another in a relationship. There are going to be times when one partner for the best interests of the relationship is gonna sometimes have to get pushy to protect and vice versa. Its not about controlling, I think it was a very LOVING thing Michael did back then on the yacht the way he took charge, because he had that right, even though Sabah had hesitations. Now why is Michael not doing the same for Sabah if she wants to exert her rights over him as his gf. Now again don't tell me, just because Sabah asks for something don't mean she's gonna get it, because Sabine girl I need to talk to you about what happened in the last chapter when Michael cornered Sabah in the shower and MADE her say yes to having kids under very manipulative circumstances.

    :wassat: Doesn't that sound like double standard to you?? I asked you this question yesterday and you didn't answer. Is Michael not letting Sabah meet Melissa because Michael is hiding something about him and Melissa. Is he afraid that he might come to know something about him and Melissa that might change how Sabah looks at Michael and Sabah might realize that Michael was a fault also partially. Because let me tell you if I found out my bf did this to a another girl, that would raise my eyebrows and make me question him whether he will do the same to me. Is that what Michael is afraid of. I have found when people like this are very secretive and not being honest, they are hiding something. because we don't really know what happened between them. I still stand by what I said that Michael is MORE wrong than Meilissa here. Yes I agree she made a bad choice, but don't you think Michael was more in the wrong going to her place knowing this girl is in love with him and by having sex with her, he is only MAKING her think her dreams of being him will come true. Its like he took Melissa who was soaring high above the clouds, into outer space by screwing her and the poor girl fell flat on her face. I still think Michael owes her an apology, and an explanation, and you said she should have kept her legs closed I say Michael should have kept it in his pants knowing what is going on in her heart. SO YES he does owe her an explanation for why he gave her false hope.

    Again that sounds like double standards to me Sabine.

  38. StrangerInMoscow says:

    Yes...15 times. I'm not exaggerating.lol. Its insane. I'm sick and tired of moving. I wanna have a permanant place.lol. Aghhh...ill be playing LOTS of MJ to help me get motivated.haha.

  39. Sabine says:

    Good day Sonia,

    Sonia girl, I know this might be a hard concept for you to understand, I'm actually amazed at it myself, but when I tell you I AM NOT writing this story, I swear, I'm not.

    What I feel about relationships, how I feel a healthy relationship should be and how I feel healthy people should relate to each other has nothing to do with what I write in this story!!!! It is totally separate.

    Whatever it comes to me that the characters say or decide to do I write, and I leave my judgment/opinion out of it.

    So Michael in this story to me, is just being Michael and I am writing it to stay true to his character.

    And Sabah, however she is being written, is how she is being given to me.

    That's why I can discuss the story like I'm not writing it, like I'm a reader, because in a way, after I write it, I am the reader, because it's all new to me.

    I don't even remember half of what I wrote because I haven't gone back and re-read -- I want to keep that part of my mind fresh and open to receive.

    So I can't answer any of your questions!!!! I don't know what's going to happen. I can try to explain why Michael has double standards but really, it's just my opinion. And I've already given you my opinion over and over!!!!

    LOL! You'd have to ask Michael or Sabah :w00t:

  40. Colette says:

    Sabine is it time yet for the new chapter?? :ninja:
    Please haven't we suffered enough :lol:

  41. Sabine says:

    Collette, girl, didn't you get your six pack of Liquid CobraCrack?

    Here you go, drink up!!!!
    :devil:

    :smile:

  42. deedeeluvmike says:

    :silly: jack be nimble,jack be quick

    :biggrin: jack please let sabine put up that chappie quick

    :lol: so we can all read about MJ's magic stick :wink:

  43. Sonia says:

    :wub: :heart: Sabine thanks for making that clear. Actually you know, that also did cross my mind that its not really Sabine but the God of Fiction making you write I understand that, and its hard to grasp the concept that you're both writer/reader at the same time.

    When I discuss things with you, that is totally separate also, in that I discuss with you like all the other ladies here as well. I know the story is being given to you, and all we as readers can do is just discuss what we think, feel is right or wrong and everything that is happening. I'm aware of that, and I guess its just our discussions concerning every aspect of your stories that becomes grounds for discussion and debate. I know you can't change the story its just coming to you, but once we read, we do have all kinds of different opinions about what is right or wrong and those are not dependent on any God of Fiction, and they don't follow any rule or convention. We could debate till the cows come home but the story will just come to you, and through you doesn't matter what we all think, LOL!!! But we're all a bunch of crack addicts and I guess we just don't know when to put on the brakes!! But that's never gonna stop anyone from discussing which I think is so much fun.

    :lol: When is the next chapter coming by the way??? I can't wait.

    :wub: Oh Sabine I just want to say I'm sorry if I got a bit carried away, I've said this before and I'll say it again I love your stories because I'm hoping Sabah can do for Michael what no one could do for him in real life. Its just that I find it strange at times darling Sabah is always heeding Michael's requests more than her, and I'm afraid by the time they get to the 90's when all that nonsense starts he might not listen to her when she might have his best interests at heart and that could prove dangerous for him like when he goes through that drug addiction. Sabah has been a sweetheart listening to him and I felt Michael should do the same for her that's all.

  44. Sabine says:

    DeeDee seriously, when is that record coming out? :lol:

    Sonia, to me what would be healing for Michael is not if he listened to Sabah, when the drama starts but if he, in himself, because of the support and love that Sabah has given him, grows and evolves into a person that can make good choices, with Sabah being there to have his back and support him.

    To me, that is what would have made a difference in Michael's life.

    When is the next chapter coming by the way??? I can’t wait.

    What was that?

    Um, yeah

    :whistle:

    :ninja:

    :face:

  45. deedeeluvmike says:

    :wub: @ SONIA.THANKS HUN i feel for the girl but she going way over board with the chasing now :silly:

    and i hope you're not stopping now?
    b.c i am so enjoying this healty debate that you and Sabine got going :w00t:

    you know sabz, i love you but oyu have put yourself in a fine pickle missy with this sneak prview of yours; you have whetted our appetite so much so that you have sparked an discussion of said upcoming chap that if it is not as spectacular as previewed then we all CCC's will have tofind you whereever the hell you are and put a beat down on YOU [j/k] for playing with OUR emotions

    but then again i aint even gonna sweat it b/c i know you are good for it, the previous chaps bear you witness

  46. Sabine says:

    So then I'm going to change the poll to Will Sabine get beat down after she puts up the chapter?

    No, Sabine delivers grade A CobraCrack and we're not worried
    Yes, Sabine has got us feening to badly at this point, nothing is going to satisfy us! Let's get her!!!!!!

    :lol:

    :devil:

  47. deedeeluvmike says:

    :smile: sabz i'm working on it at the moment :biggrin:

    m
    may i vote now? i already said i aint worried b/c you do put up grade A stuff '' all de time'' :wink:

  48. Sonia says:

    @deedee

    :lol: I didn't know you were enjoying it!

    :lol: Actually I'm amazed at myself how did I go off on just a sneak preview so much. I think when the chapter comes out, I'll handcuff my hands behind my back and then read so I won't be able to type anything. Or maybe I'll just go under a rock!

    Well I guess we were just have a big disagreement about whether Michael owes Melissa any apology or explanation. That's why I gave a hypothetical scenario, that what if Sabah was to do to Michael what he did to Melissa. Remember the time Sabah didn't see him for one week and he saw her with Jonathan and Michael went nuts, and then he passed out when he thought Sabah had been kidnapped. What do you think will happen to Michael if Sabah was to just disappear from his life and not tell him?

    :lol: First I think poor Michael will almost have a heart attack end up in the hospital for days on life support and be traumatized. Then after he comes out, don't you think he will be hunting Sabah down looking for an explanation? I think he would. Its another matter no one can make Sabah do anything, all we as readers can do is JUST discuss what we think is morally right or wrong, and what a character should do. What actually goes down in the story when Sabine dishes out a chapter is not based on our comments. Cuz if I was Melissa I'd feel very used and like a cheap whore and personally it would really help me on the road to recovery if Michael could at least genuinely say he's sorry and show remorse that he made a mistake. It might not work wonders but its a start.

  49. Sonia says:

    :lol: Sabine

    :w00t: You deliver grade A cobracrack! Its a preview and look how many comments it has generated!

  50. Sabine says:

    Awwww shucks thanks, DeeDeee & Sonia!!!! I am humbled!!!! :blush:

    Sonia, question for you:

    Do you realize there's a difference between what one thinks someone is morally obligated to do and what one HAS to do?

    To me the root of the debate yesterday is a discussion about free will.

    We all have it. We are free to be as nice, kind and loving or as disruptive, mean spirited and domineering as we choose.

    You do realize that or do you think there is some unseen force that is out there that will make people act "right" . . . . or makes people act "wrong"?

    All of which is subjective, because your right might be my wrong and visa versa :wink:

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